Feedback & Possible Revisions

In January, we established that the audience would like to see more of a response from Riot to The Maker, simply to not leave a gap in the scene. In the script this is used creatively to characterize Riot as a silent-type male character, along with the fact that he is completely loyal to The Maker, so it's only given that he is ready for an important event that the pair is hosting. So, in light of our audiences wants we will add a head nod to skip dialogue and to a response.

Many other corrections were not noted by the audience. There are some effects missing from the scene, along with fixing the altered audio that is in the present clip. Reducing the static and giving the scene more of an ambiance seems like the best approach to improving the scene.

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